Write your own 5 fragment sentence with its revision for the equivalent
Answer (1)
1. Fragment: After the long hike up the mountain. Revision: After the long hike up the mountain, we finally reached the breathtaking summit.2. Fragment: Although the rain poured heavily. Revision: Although the rain poured heavily, we continued our journey through the forest.3. Fragment: Running late for the meeting. Revision: Running late for the meeting, Sarah hurried to catch the next bus.4. Fragment: While preparing dinner in the kitchen. Revision: While preparing dinner in the kitchen, John listened to his favorite podcast.5. Fragment: Because the traffic was unusually heavy. Revision: Because the traffic was unusually heavy, we decided to take an alternative route.
